When Time Remains | A Pantoum About Life and Relationships

This imaginative poem is a pantoum about someone pondering how time and relationships change while grappling with the complexities of what remains amid change.

When Time Remains

When time seems faster than before

I wonder, at times, what will remain?

The days are long, the years a bore

I asked, will your love ever wane?

I wonder, at times, what will remain?

When life went on, and apart they grew

I asked, will your love ever wane?

As nighttime crept into our view

When life went on, and apart they grew

Like leaves dropping from the trees,

As nighttime crept into our view

Our souls cried out, "Have mercy, PLEASE!”

Like leaves dropping from the trees

The days are long, the years a bore

Our souls cried out, “Have mercy, PLEASE!”

When time seems faster than before

© 2026 Candace A. Jones. All Rights Reserved.

Featured Image Credit: Concept and creative direction by Candace A. Jones
AI-generated artwork created with OpenAI’s ChatGPT

Candace A. Jones

I’m a beloved daughter of the King of kings, aiming to bring others to His heart.

https://www.refinedbycandace.com
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